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Wednesday, 21 October 2015

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I have been learning how to do an OREO paragraph.  OREO stands for opinion, reason, example, and restating your opinion.  Restate means to say it again.  I wrote this paragraph to persuade the reader to agree with my idea.   My Writing

The most phenomenal World animal is the cheetah.
The most phenomenal creation in the world is a cheetah because it like a lion but it doesn’t run the same km.This is because it has long teeth, fast-lighting legs.for an Example it can run 110 – 120 km/h.and learn lot and lot of facts about it.


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  1. Anonymous22 October 2015 at 13:58

    Kia ora Moe,

    Wow, nice work! I didn't know what an OREO was but I just found out that an OREO stands for Opinion,Reason,Example and Opinion.
    I would love to see more posts on your blog.
    Make sure you proofread your writing with a learning partner and make sure you are using capital letters correctly.

    But GOOD WORK THOUGH! Ka Pai Moe!

    Sincerely:Toto

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